The Epic Rpness of the Beginning

Jay flicked Light's ear and then journeyed on, batting at some random snow. She laughed as some landed on her nose. She whiped it off with a little blueish paw. Her pads were blackened and her paws were wide. The mark of a tee climber. In the distance, she saw her current home; a huge rocky ledge that rose into the sky, almost scraping it.

Rose hissed as snow landed on her thickish, smooth pelt. She knew that snow would be all over the place by morning. She eyed the moon, which looked as if it were placed right upon the huge rocky ledge.
"Jay, are you sure you kn-" But Rose was interrupted.

Jay laughed.
"Do I know where I live? Duh!" Jay mewed, and continued on.

(is this the begining of the pm I sent you? Cause if it is, then meh!)

(idk..but..I really don't like the whole skipping around... DX)
Chipmunk padded on with the rest of the cats and the kits, eying her surroudnings warily. She'd never been to this area of the territory before, and kept her guard up even though she felt she could trust the kit. Chipmunk glanced over at Viper to see that his black eyes flashed with yellow every time he darted them from side to side. Well at least I'm not the only one who's wary about this. she thought gladly.

Viper looked up at the falling snow. He flashed his eyes from side to side as he leaped over a log. Everything was becoming covered with snow, they would have to keep moving, and quickly.

Willow padded after the group of cats, and glanced up as tiny snowflakes danced, and twirled in the air. One landed on her nose, and she sneezed, startling the kit. Tiny mewls erupted from the little bundle of fur, and Willow purred her lullaby again. It sounded distantly familiar to her, but where had she heard it before?

Jay smiled broadly as they all stood next to the huge rock hill. She lifted a forepaw to the sky, as if singing whatever cats called opera, and cried, "Ta-da! Home sweet home!"

Rose looked doubtfully from Jay to the big hill. Her right ear flicked a bit.
"Um... Jay... You live on a big rock?" Rose mewed, whiskers twitching.

Jay gave the black-and-white she-cat a withering glance, and then she rolled her eyes.
"Not here, over here!" Jay led them to the other side of the rock hill. Jay smiled at the tunnel that was two tail lengths wide and three tail lengths tall.
"In here, sillies!" Jay shouted and then launched right into the hole.

Rose flashed Viper a worried glance, then shrugged, and slipped through. She didn't like the way she couldn't see anything. Her whiskers snagged the thin walls of the undergrounbd passage uncomfortably. She cringed. But suddenly... She could see... Light?

No... It couldn't be. How could there be light in this hole?Suddenly, Rose's jaw dropped to the floor. Her clear blue eyes were now as wide as moons, possibly wider.
What she had just walked into was a huge cave underneath (sp? =.=;) the huge rocky hill. And inside the cave were old nests that had a smell so old, she couldn't detect it. The only fresh scents were cat, and slight moisture.
But it was not just the hugeness of the place that surprised her. It was the fact that small, clear stones that glowed lined the walls. She closed her mouth and eyes and heard a slight whisper.

Jay started to snort with laughter.
"Hey, you dead or somethin'? 'EY! You can all come down now!" Jay yowled.

Rose looked at the kit with an annoyed expression upon her face.
"This place is amaazing! Come on down!" Rose yowled as well.

Viper shared Rose's look of worry, but lightened as he heard her calls from in the tunnel. He padded into the cramped, dark tunnel, edging his way along with his thin tail against the walls. His dark eyes glowed with the bright shimmer of yellow when the light hit them as the tunnel opened into a large cave. He looked around in amazement at the glimmering stones lining the cave walls and the size of the large cave.

Chipmunk, excited by her friend's calls, wasted no time in bounding through the dark tunnel. Her small form easily fit between the walls, unlike her friends. Chipmunk's small paws skittered to a stop on the pebbly floor as she entered the wide cave. "This place is amazing! Look at the stones!" she exclaimed, her little tail lashing around behind her and her deep amber eyes shining as they darted around the cave.

Willow padded slowly into the dark cave. It was dark at first, but then got lighter. Willow couldn't believe her eyes! There has to be room for a thousand cats in here! She thought.
((yeah its short cause, well the site is being dumber than Lunarpaw and not letting me sign in so thats why it sucks...oh nevermind...))

((Wait did Twisted say Chipmunk was a weird name? o_O))

((Oh xD Well that's nice of him lol))